Feedback of first draft

Feedback from 4 people.


Likes.

• Good performance shots
• Wide variety of shots
• Good continuity
• Good facial expressions
• Cuts quickly
• Shots of whole person (high angle)

Dislikes.

• Some shots last too long
• No narrative shots
• Some shots are a little bit too long for the song

Comparison.

• Similar video’s, both have similar performance shots
• The lighting was different on the you tube clip, I think you should add similar backgrounds on your video
• Panning slightly different positioning on you tube clip – looks good.
• Dark background on video so main focus is on the singing.
• Similar shots on both videos.

First draft of music video - comparing and feedback

This is our first draft of our music video.
We got our inspiration of the style of our music video from the video 'Incomplete Lullaby' by Lisa Mitchell.




For our feedback we are going to ask people to compare these two videos together by looking at the conventions used and missing, and the likes and dislikes of the music video.

There were some places where the video goes black as we have not finished it yet, and we still haven't added in the narrative or animation scenes.

So it was a half finished version of our video.

Change in scene

Originally we were going to film a parts of our video in a house porch with her looking out the window, to go with the connotations of our video, searching for love.
However when we did practice shots we came across a few problems with the lighting, as we couldn't control it to be constant and look professional, so we decided to change the scene.
We changed the background of the scene to a plain black background so we could control the lighting much more easily and to our own preference.

We have taken inspiration from music videos such as 'Incomplete Lullaby- Lisa Mitchell' and 'Your Song'- Ellie Goulding.